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Once Upon a Time...A TEN-MINUTE EXERCISE: Class 4Two versions of the same idea:Magic:In the dark moon light I could still see their faces.They came at night and they left at night. The Fiend:
In the dark moon light I could still see their faces.They came at night and they left at night. A gigantic animal was walking on planet called Pluto. It looked like horse with the head of lion and with legs of the bull. The alian was so astonished when he saw that animal. It was winter time on Pluto so the alien was cold. He never had been on Pluto before, he never saw the yellow colored trees, black water, red sky, pink snow of the Pluto. The alian wanted to hunt for that animal, but he was stopped by the Plutonian police. They said him that he needs to pay five 'plutoes' for breaking the law of the Pluto Once upon a time it was Saturday we were going to sailing with my friends and we had this great wind to sail and we knew that at the end the wind would became a storm so we prepared the boats and get the boats to the sea the wind was eight knots and we had four-point-seven meter boats with two sails and a spinnaker. so we were sailing and hanging out with our friends then suddenly the wind has chanced and we were to heavy when we were hanging out then the boat turned over and the water was eight degrees and it was freezing and I was under the sail and I could not breath and I could not think at all.Then my swam to me and took me from under the sail but we were still freezing then we turned the boat over and got back to the beach very quickly. I was sick for a week and next time we went, I dressed differently! Once upon a time near my city somebody was building a very big zoo. The owner was a famous explorer; in fact he was just returned from the south Africa and he caught a lot of strange animals and birds full of light colours on their skins.The most beautiful animal was a gigantic tiger with shining eyes and coulored skin. Fin. Work produced in november 1998. 'The Kid'By Sir Charles ChaplinTURN THE PAGE: A Salute to Sir Charles ...Fat Jack's Site.A Retelling of a fragment of the film:
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